How to write short
stories
1. Fewer Characters – More than TWO
is Crowd
The golden rule for selecting
characters in short story is “Fewer are better”. A short story would more
effectively convey its meaning if it has very few characters – one protagonist,
one other main character and no supporting or side characters would be ideal.
2. Develop Characters for Theme – Do
not fall in Love
Animating character with perfect
adjectives and examples are a must for connecting readers with the character;
however, typically while writing short stories, do not fall in love with your
character and overdo the characterization. (But in case you fall in love…
Congratulations!!! Now it is time for you to write novel or drama). You need to
muster all but only required characteristics and decorate them poetically – use
appropriate adjectives, interesting dialogues, colourful descriptions, or even
short-lived (in story) side characters. But again, remember, you are writing
short story and therefore you need to be choosy in painting your characters –
must use needed paints (to match your theme), and must do it fast (as short as
possible).
3. Single and Short Time Frame – One
at a Time Please
Unit of time frame may vary from
hours to days to weeks to years. The golden rule in selecting time frame for
short stories is “keep it shorter” and “have it single”. Short story that has
setting of few hours may typically be clearer and more effective than with
setting of few months or years.
But what if your plot needs longer
time frame? And what if single time frame is not sufficient?
Be very careful. It may turn fatal
attempt for short story writing. Re-look your plot because both the
requirements need dynamic setting that is NOT recommended for short stories.
But if you are still convinced for longer time frame then remember two points:
firstly, advance events in your story faster, and secondly, place important
events almost at equal distance. If you need multiple time frames for your
plot, for example many scenes of fifteen minutes of online chatting, structure
it in chronological or reverse chronological order. Avoid crisscross
transitions among time frames (even expert writer would avoid it). Further you
must use signposts (for example subheadings with dates) or any other creative
method to provide clear idea of the time frames and of the transitions among
them to readers.
4. Vivid Surroundings – Appeal to
Five Senses of Readers
As a writer of short stories you
must vividly describe surroundings. Here vivid description should not be
misunderstood by predictable events and actions. You may choose to save few
descriptions for climax but whatever you decide to disclose must be absolutely
clear and very importantly be appealing to five senses of your readers. Be
poetic, use suitable adjectives, script dialogues, or even deploy side characters…
do whatever you need to ensure that the reader lives your story while reading.
5. Catchy First Line – Love at First
Sight
You must so choose a start that your
reader gets hooked to the story. Now you may have question – how to do this?
Well, answer is not so straight forward. You must know your readers well: what
they like, what they speak, what surprises them, what arouses their interest…
but finally it is your creativity. Nonetheless you must create confusion or
question in readers’ mind by first line of your story. Your reader must try to
get answer from best of her ability and experience but she should finally end
up digging into subsequent lines of your stories to quench her temporarily
aroused inquisitiveness.
6. Choose Suitable Point of View –
Who Narrates it Better
You need a tailor who will sew
events and actions together in a meaningful and fashionable way in your story.
Typically it should be one of the characters you choose – The Narrator of your
story. Remember the narrator puts point of view from her or his or its
perspective. Whose perspective would be better? It is not always perspective of
protagonist that would make the plot better.
7. One Conflict Only – One Enemy is
Enough
Have you ever tried resolving a
conflict either professionally or personally? If yes, you know it takes time
and unfortunately you do not have time in short stories. Choose only one
conflict around the central idea of the theme. What does bother your readers?
Do you see something that is still not resolved? Can you create confusion by
revealing something surprising? I am sure you would get many ideas around any
theme by answering these questions but choose one that you can personally
relate (something you were touched recently or intensely). Why? More you relate
to conflict, better you can animate the settings and develop characters.
8. Intense but Real Conflict
As we discussed, conflict gives life
to short story, you must heightened the tension in your plot. Overcoming easy
obstructions would not make your lead characters memorable. But, do not overdo
it. Very rarely a superman would be liked in a short story. Even if you present
a superhero on one side of conflict, you must show few “weakness” to make your
story real.
So how to do it? Take a stand in
beginning, make the stand dicey by posing sequence of actions against this
stand, and just when both sides are “equally” fighting for superiority bring a
“surprising” element that clearly makes your stand a winner or loser. That’s
it.
9. Theme in Focus – Nothing More,
Nothing Less
Every word in short story must be
written for the theme therefore it is very important that theme is clear to you
when you write story. Other elements of short stories – characters, settings,
plot and conflicts – must tightly but comprehensively be tied to the theme. Be
very careful not to be tempted to digress even slightly from the theme while
writing short stories. You must heartedly decorate the setting and develop the
characters but within narrow subject line as specified by the theme. Sometime,
it may so happen that you may not be very sure of the theme while starting your
story. No worry, in such case you determine the theme after completing the
story and then critically chisel away extra flab that is not really needed for
the theme of your short story.
10. Break Rules if Needed – Unleash
Your Creativity
This is most important tip for
becoming a successful short story writer – write for yourself. Unleash your
creativity without impounding it by any rule.
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